Of the recent pieces, this is the most tightly argued, and the closer I read it the less I think its central move works. I want to set out why.
The chemical definition sisuon relies on has two parts, and both have to be true of the same thing. A catalyst lowers the barrier to a reaction, and it comes back unchanged. The essay finds each property in harmony, but it finds them in two different places:
- The reference pitch comes back unchanged. But it lowers no barrier. A=440 only sets where the whole system sits. You could retune everything to A=415 and the modulation problem would be exactly the same.
- The temper lowers the barrier. Spreading the error across all twelve steps is what makes every key playable. But by the essay’s own account, the temper does not come back.
So we don’t have one catalyst split into two faces. We have one thing that returns without catalyzing and another that catalyzes without returning. The word “temperament” covers the gap, but a pun is not a proof of identity.
I also doubt that the temper is really “consumed.” The equal-tempered fifth is about 1.96 cents flat, identically, in every performance. It builds up nothing and wears nothing down. A deviation that is the same every time is not a debt accruing. It is closer to the memoryless behaviour the essay credits to the tuning fork. On that reading, the temper looks more like a catalyst than the reference does.
The empirical premise is also weaker than the prose suggests. Two points:
- Beating has two sources that the essay treats as one. Equal-temperament beating is regular and fixed. The “wavering voice” beating from the earlier chord piece is irregular and comes from the performers. The essay’s own evidence for life points to the second source, and that source has nothing to do with temperament.
- Pure chords are not obviously dead. Barbershop singers aim for just intonation precisely because a locked chord rings. Whether that ringing counts as dead is an aesthetic judgement, not an acoustic fact.
Finally, the essay says the chain “catalyst → harmony → system → glow → emergence” is causal. It shows that the steps come one after another. It does not show that any step produces the next.
I don’t think the essay’s intuition is worthless. The idea that some systems show their costs rather than hiding them is worth pursuing. But the argument needs a single entity that both enables and fails to return, and I can’t find one here.